ext_47402 ([identity profile] fireflower314.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sissy 2008-05-09 02:53 am (UTC)

Oh my goodness, that was great. The idea of Maxie being invisible makes me laugh, just because she's Maxie, and thus the antithesis of invisible. Must've been an interesting experience for her. And of course Spinelli's ability is perfect. I loved Noah showing up at the end there, too. He's probably one of my favorite Heroes characters, so it was cool seeing him. ^_^ I can't wait to see what you write next!

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